So, I'm just now becoming aware of my writing. A lot of my characters use NY slang. This includes "fam", "cuz", "money", "B", etc. I am a New Yorker, but I have mentioned time and time again that Shoreview, Jordansberg is right next to California, making it on the West Coast. I apologize for this inaccuracy, in a way I kind of like that I do this. So you don't have to point this out to me, I have come to realize this. And it will likely continue. I might even occasionally throw in the NJ slang term "bro". Please continue to read.
As the buzzer was going off the noise coming from everywhere in the gymnasium could be heard over it. The crowd cheering and yelling, the female's step team coming onto the floor after the basketball players cleared it, and even the gossip coming out of Tiana's mouth. I bet she's still talking about me. She's had the biggest crush on me since this past year and since I won't give her any play, she runs her mouth. 'Derek is sleeping with Mrs. Ambers to get a good grade', she'd say. 'Derek has a baby mama in the next town, that's why he doesn't date any of the girls here.' She'll go on and I always have to shut her down. I glanced down the bleachers to my right. She's there and staring at me. I roll my eyes in my mind and just look away slowly. My boy plays for our high school basketball team. Our uniforms are red. I catch sight of Shan in the number 3. Three was his favorite number just because. It's a coincidence ...
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