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What I Have Come To Realize

So, I'm just now becoming aware of my writing. A lot of my characters use NY slang. This includes "fam", "cuz", "money", "B", etc. I am a New Yorker, but I have mentioned time and time again that Shoreview, Jordansberg is right next to California, making it on the West Coast. I apologize for this inaccuracy, in a way I kind of like that I do this. So you don't have to point this out to me, I have come to realize this. And it will likely continue. I might even occasionally throw in the NJ slang term "bro". Please continue to read.

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